Skill Post

 ( Shark Attack )

 
- summerizing

 Many people are frightened when they go to the open ocean.
But shark will not attack you even though you saw a shark.
Also, the possibility of  attack  from shark is lower than from lightning and drown.
For example, when 180 peoples were died from the lightening, then 11 peoples will attack by the shark.
Also, when 1 person is drown among 3.5 million groups, then 1person will attack by shark among the 9 million peoples.
But when you still afraid of shark attack you should stay in groups and you should stay out if you cut by something.


- paraphrasing

( the last paraghragh of shark attack )

 There are some method to be  not attacked by shark.
Fist you should you should stay in groups when you play in the open beach.
Also, you need to stay out of the water if you cut from something.

(article)

-original article

Title: Rides that know how you feel

 Can an ordinary swing be a thrilling, unpredictable ride? Yes, it is very possible. In fact, a reasearch team from the UK is working on turning your ordinary play ground equipment and amusement roller coasters into a thrilling new experience.
 Ride-operators used to adjust the speed of  their rollercoaster by looking at the expressions on the passengers' faces, trying to determine the emotional condition of their riders. Nowadays,the roller coaster rides are all standardized by an automatic computer system. But some people find the average speed to be boring.
 In order to satisfy those people who want more thrill,researchers from  theUniversity of  Nottingham in the UK are working on a 'biofeedback' system. It  helps adjust rides based on the monitored heart and breathing rates of its users.
 Amusement parks in the UK are already interested in the idea and hope to design future rides with their help."The emotional value we're interested in here is fear," says Brendan Walker, one of  the researchers. So, if you love scary and exciting rides,there seems to be plenty to come in the near future!

(article from http://116.193.91.204/ocp/skin/ajax/ajax_skin01/ebook.php?bookNo=110516153951 )
- summerizing

 Researchers in UK are trying to make a thrilling rides with play ground equitment and roller coster.
Ride-operator should adjust the speed of the roller coster by users emotional feelings but nowadays they are using the computer to adjust the speed of roller coasters.
But there are some peoples who are not satisfied with the speed so UK researchers are researchinng about biofeedback system.
Amusment parks in UK are already interested about that.

- pharaphrasing
( the second phraghraph of the artucle)

The people who are adjusting the speed  of roller coster are adjusting the speed by the emotional feelings.
But these days they use computers to adjust the  speed of roller coster.
However, some peoples are boring about the speed of  the roller coster